February 27th, 2010:
When Commas Collide: Confusion over Closely Placed Commas
Here, once again, are the four essential comma functions:
1. Commas show slight pauses.
2. Commas set things off from the main line of a sentence.
3. Commas show a slight drop in pitch.
4. Commas separate items from one another
Sometimes, these comma functions run together. The untrained eye sees commas as just that: commas. He does not see how two commas in a sentence are setting off an interrupting phrase, while another nearby comma is separating items in a list. He sees only one running group of commas, but that grouping makes no sense. I contend that these situations are to blame for the generally held myth that commas are confusing and too variable to understand.
What do I mean by the notion of commas running together? An example will serve best:
Bob, the adjunct I mentioned earlier, teaches courses, and he performs other duties, including course planning, committee work, and student advising.
Now, notice that these commas occur in relatively close proximity of each other. This might cause the reader to think, for example, that I am setting off the phrase, “teaches courses,” from the main line of the sentence. But that’s not at all what I am doing. Those two commas are not acting as a paired group to set off “teaches courses.” Just to know for sure, let’s remove the phrase to see if it is not part of the sentence’s main line:
Bob, the adjunct I mentioned earlier and he performs other duties.
That omission didn’t work out very well, did it? It didn’t work because those two commas—although very close in proximity—are performing two separate roles. The first comma (the one before the word, “teaches”) is acting as the closing comma for setting off the phrase, “the adjunct I mentioned earlier,” from the main line of the sentence. It applies backward to the previous phrase—not forward to the following one. The second comma (the one that occurs between “earlier” and “and”) serves the role of strengthening the coordinating conjunction, “and” (since “and” is combining two complete sentences). The commas are like two employees from different companies, who—as chance would have it—are working in town within just a few feet of one another. Understandably, a passerby might confuse them as working together on the same project, when—in fact—they are doing two very different tasks.
Notice my last sentence, the one that ends the paragraph above. Why did I use dashes to set off “in fact”? Here is the sentence, rewritten with commas instead of dashes to set off the prepositional phrase, “in fact”:
Understandably, a passerby might confuse them as working together on the same project, when, in fact, they are doing two very different tasks.
As the rewrite above shows, I chose dashes in the original version to avoid this kind of comma confusion. With commas, the sentence is cognitively confusing. Also, it’s just plain ugly: it looks choppy and broken. It looks confusing, and it is confusing. Revisiting our analogy of the two workers, using dashes to set off “in fact” is the equivalent of the two employees wearing distinctly different uniforms, so people do not become confused as to the companies they represent. (We will explore this use in later articles on dashes and parentheses. Stay tuned.)
So, keep the example above in mind as you use commas in sentences. Such close-proximity comma confusion is unavoidable at times, but try to minimize it in your prose. The key is to use all tools at your disposal (like dashes, parentheses, and semicolons) to make the reading experience as clear and smooth as possible for your audience. If that fails (and sometimes it does), you may simply have to restructure the sentence so the commas do not fall so close together that they collide. That may sound like a lot of effort, but trust me: your readers will thank you for it by reading on and experiencing your ideas, opinions, and dreams.
With the essential comma functions covered, it’s time to examine some of the specific practices of comma placement. For example, should we include the final comma in a list (that is, the comma that comes before the word, “and”)? If a parenthetical phrase occurs at the end of a clause that is set off by a comma, would the comma go before or after the parenthetical phrase? And what about quotation marks and commas: if a comma occurs at the end of a quote, does it go inside or outside the quotation marks? Why in some writing is the comma inside the quotes, while in other writing it falls outside? Is there any method to all this madness?
I will answer these questions and more in the upcoming set of comma articles: Comma Odds & Ends. Here is the link to the first article in that series:
Christopher Altman, a community-college composition specialist, is passionate about bringing the art of effective writing to average, everyday Americans. He has published work in the field of medieval literature, and has authored a book on advertising language entitled, Telling the Truth to Deceive: How Advertisers Manipulate the English Language. Mr. Altman is an assistant professor of English at Onondaga Community College in Syracuse, New York.
Comma Function: Commas Separate Things
Before examining the final comma function, let’s review the running list of essential comma functions:
1. Commas show slight pauses.
2. Commas set things off from the main line of a sentence.
3. Commas show a slight drop in pitch.
There’s still one more comma function left for us to explore, and in a sense, it’s the most essential function. Here it is, in all its grand complexity:
Commas separate things.
We have explored how commas separate modifying elements (words, phrases, and clauses) from the main line of a sentence. In a very general sense, when I say, “Commas separate things,” I could mean that such separations include the divisions between those modifying elements. With functions 1 and 3 in mind, I could mean that commas separate things (like modifying elements) by representing slight pauses and drops in pitch. So, in this general sense, the notion that “commas separate things,” serves as the all-encompassing comma function.
In this article, though, I intend this rule in a very specific sense. With that in mind, I will modify the rule a bit:
Commas separate items to show that they are to be considered as individual things.
Commas Separate Items in Lists
This function applies when we use commas to separate items in a list (also called, “items in a series”). Consider the example below:
The series on apostrophes explores possessives, contractions, and s-ending nouns.
Notice the commas in the sentence above. They act as visual guides to the reader, to express the notion that the three items are separate and distinct from one another, but that they are still connected in the sense that they are all explored in the series on apostrophes. (Paradoxically, the comma combines things, even as it divides them.) If the sentence is spoken, those commas become pauses that allow the listener to hear the separations.
But are these commas necessary? After all, the reader could get by without the aid of those commas in determining that the items are separate. Here is the sentence, without the commas:
The series on apostrophes explores possessives contractions and s-ending nouns.
Even if we can perceive these separations without the help of dividing commas (and I think most readers can, with varying degrees of effort), this second sentence requires more thinking on the part of the reader—and it’s not the kind of thinking we want readers to do. It makes the reader do a double-take. Yes, the reader can get by. However, getting by is most assuredly not what we want for our readers. We want to serve our readers with prose that guides them smoothly and seamlessly through our ideas and assertions. If readers do not feel well served, they will turn away from our writing and find something better to read. And that’s the last thing we want.
Although I discuss them here as an element that writers use to serve readers, such dividing commas are not merely a matter of preference. The use of dividing commas is a set-in-stone rule of writing. However, it is also a tried-and-true rule, one that exists for good reason: clear communication.
In some cases, separating commas are absolutely necessary to the meaning of sentences. In such situations, the reader cannot even manage get by in understanding the prose’s essential message. For example, consider this sentence:
I enjoy experiencing movies and writing.
What am I saying here? Am I saying that I enjoy three acts (experiencing, movies, and writing), or that I enjoy two acts (experiencing movies and experiencing writing)? There is yet another possibility: I could be saying that I enjoy (1) the act of writing and (2) the act of experiencing movies.
Which of these three messages do I intend? Without the aid of commas, there is no way to know for sure. The reader, if given no clarifying context, has no way of knowing for sure what this sentence states. She is left with three possibilities. As she continues to read, she can only ponder which possibility she is reading about in later sentences and paragraphs. (Think about that: the lack of commas causes harm, not only in the example sentence, but the sentences and paragraphs that follow it.) What reader wants that?
In addition to separating items in lists, commas separate other things. Commas separate elements within a date, specifically the day of the month and the year:
Christopher Altman’s birthday is November 18, 1977.
(Note: Do you hear the pause between “18″ and “1977″? Do you hear the slight change in pitch?)
(Additional Note: November 18 is my actual birthday. Mark it on your calendar and send me a present when that date rolls around.)
Commas Make Long Numerical Expressions Easy to Read
Commas also serve a very important function in writing large numbers: they separate numbers into sets of three digits to help the reader differentiate between large number groups like millions, billions, trillions, and so on. Here is an example of a number without commas:
Over the course of the last fiscal year, the company earned $40927943.00.
Ugh. That’s hard to read. Now, try this one:
Over the course of the last fiscal year, the company earned $40,927,943.00
Unless you are very good with numbers, I expect you had a great deal of trouble figuring out if that first number was in the 40 millions or the 400 millions. In fact, I’ll wager that many readers attempting to identify that comma-less number would identify it by mentally grouping the numbers, from right to left, into sets of three. The comma does that for the reader, allowing her to know the identity of large numbers, at a glance. Yet again—even with numerical expressions—the comma functions to serve our readers.
As a courtesy to our readers, we should apply this rule even to easy-to-read four-digit numbers:
Bob, an adjunct English instructor, earns about $2,300.00 for each course he teaches.
Commas Precede Coordinating Conjunctions to Combine Two Sentences
The last use of the comma’s dividing function I will discuss has to do with coordinating conjunctions. Commas should come before coordinating conjunctions whenever the coordinating conjunctions combine two complete sentences. (Coordinating conjunction examples: and, but, yet, so, or, nor, etc.)
Here is an example:
Last year, Bob taught three literature courses, and he served on the department’s hiring committee.
Notice that I am using “and” to combine two complete, stand-alone sentences:
1. Bob taught three literature courses
2. He served on the department’s hiring committee.
The comma acts as a dividing agent, in that it adds additional force to the conjunction “and.” It says to the reader, “I am combining two big things here—sentences that could stand alone. Beware, reader: this single sentence involves, not one, but two complete (but related) messages.” It says, “Pause before this ‘and‘ to recognize that you are about to read another complete, stand-alone idea.” All that—from a comma!
Here is a sentence that expresses the same essential idea. Notice, though, that it does so with the use of a compound verb:
Bob taught three literature courses and served on the department’s hiring committee.
Now, notice that there is no comma before “and.” That is because “and” is not combining two complete sentences. It combines two verb phrases:
Bob . . .
1. taught three literature courses
and
2. served on the department’s hiring committee
The presence (or lack) of a comma in the sentences above acts as a visual cue to the reader to know what is to come in the sentence.
Well, that’s it for comma functions—almost. Before moving onto other things comma, we should explore one more consideration about comma functions: are comma functions ever at odds in sentences? Can that cause confusion for readers? To find out, read the next article, “When Commas Collide: Confusion over Closely Placed Commas.”
Here is the link:
Christopher Altman, a community-college composition specialist, is passionate about bringing the art of effective writing to average, everyday Americans. He has published work in the field of medieval literature, and has authored a book on advertising language entitled, Telling the Truth to Deceive: How Advertisers Manipulate the English Language. Mr. Altman is an assistant professor of English at Onondaga Community College in Syracuse, New York.
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Comma Function: Commas Show a Slight Drop in Pitch
In addition to showing pauses, commas can represent slight drops in pitch. On rare occasions, commas serve this purpose even when there is no pause.
You are going to see that new Avatar movie? I want to go, too.
The comma in the sentence above does not direct the reader to pause before “too.” Most people, I expect, would not read the sentence aloud this way:
I want to go [pause] too.
So, what does that comma do? Read the sentence aloud. And, make sure to play the part: imagine that you are the would-be moviegoer, and that you sincerely want to catch that new blockbuster flick. Notice that there is a change in intonation there, when speaking the adverb, “too.”
The comma shows this change, regardless of whether there is a pause. Most often though, commas show both a slight pause and a slight change in pitch or tone. Knowing this dual function of commas is a useful tool for composing natural, readable prose.
Here our running list of essential comma functions:
1. Commas show pauses
2. Commas set things off from the main line of a sentence
3. Commas represent a slight drop in pitch (discussed in this article)
There is one more essential function of commas left to explore:
Commas separate things.
In a very general sense, this is the most essential comma function, since it covers the three essential functions we have discussed thus far in these explorations of the comma. However, when I say, “Commas separate things,” I mean it here in a very specific sense. The next article will explore that specific function.
To view that article, click the link below:
Christopher Altman, a community-college composition specialist, is passionate about bringing the art of effective writing to average, everyday Americans. He has published work in the field of medieval literature, and has authored a book on advertising language entitled, Telling the Truth to Deceive: How Advertisers Manipulate the English Language. Mr. Altman is an assistant professor of English at Onondaga Community College in Syracuse, New York.







